Hello Fellow Spankos,
This week I’m continuing with another snippet from the upcoming full-length D/s novel “The Change”.
In this week’s clip we continue with what happens when Kirsten comes home from work, to find her husband Kiehl waiting for her. It’s their regular night for what they call “The Game”, their mutual exploration of discipline, desire, fantasy, and kink…
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She laid her head on her clasped arms, trying to get her breathing under control. She could feel slickness on the insides of her thighs, and hoped he couldn’t smell her arousal. She’d always been worried about her scent, and always kept herself scrupulously clean. Lately though, he’d seemed to take almost a cruel delight in her discomfiture about it.
Then he was back behind her, looming, grasping one of her hands and moving it behind her back. Cold metal pressed against the tender skin of her wrist.
“What the fuck?”
“Relax. They’re just cuffs.”
Oh. My. God.
He pinned her other arm behind her back, metal clasping over that wrist too. She pulled against the cuffs, tested their strength.
She was going nowhere.
Her heart jack-hammered in her chest, even as her pussy wept her excitement. Still, she couldn’t help but try to turn over, the feeling of vulnerability too much.
His pressed a heavy palm between her shoulder blades, his strength pinning her down easily.
“Kiehl, I don’t know if—”
“Are you okay? Are they hurting you?” His fingers traced the metal that imprisoned the delicate bones of her wrists.
“No, it’s not that…”
“Then be still. You’re fine. I won’t hurt you.”
What if I want you to? How fucked up am I?
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I hope you liked this week’s installment! I had to go just a teensy bit over my allotted eight line quota, but I hope you didn’t mind. Before you go, please take some time to visit the other stops in this week’s hop. There are a lot of great writers there, and some uber-hot excerpts!
More to come next week:)
Trent
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Well, I certainly don’t mind an extra line or two, if it’s from you Mr. Trent. :).
Glad I could oblige, Maggie:)
Ummm, very hot. She certainly not fucked up in my book, it’s okay to like pain. Some of my favorite people do. Thanks for sharing.
Agreed, 100% But yeah, those of us who do like it (from either end of the cane), do sometimes wonder what’s “wrong” with us:)
Thanks for reading!
I used to,.a good while ago, but as long as everything is safe, sane, and consensual it’s all good. We are just wired differently. I akin our play to extreme sports. We get an incredible high when we play. It’s not for everyone that is for sure, but neither is sky diving.
And I am on the other side of the cane, so yes, I do understand 100% what you are saying. Not trying to engage in a debate, I’m just sharing my feelings on it. It did take some time to get to where I am at.
I totally understand what you’re saying:). I love your positive take on all of this. Share away!
Btw — slightly off topic — I bought and read your non-fic book Taken In Hand: A Guide to Domestic Discipline, Power Exchange Relationships and Related BDSM Topics and I absolutely LOVED it. I’m always interested in getting an idea for how other couples/people navigate their exploration of DD and/or kink, and I found your book to be refreshingly direct, honest, and most of all, positive.
Very well done.
Very, very hot snippet!
Aww, shucks. Thanks, PK!
Nice seesaw of emotion.
Thank you, Cara:)
She was going nowhere – love that line. Great snippet
Glad you liked it, Ashe:)
Relax, they’re just cuffs? What a great line. . . I’ll be laughing about that all day 🙂 Great snippet – thanks for sharing.
It’s totally what someone I know very, very well would say:)
Thanks for stopping by, Shelly!
interesting snippet, Trent. It was intriguing to see you deal with her feels about her odor.
Thanks, Joelle. I’ve actually had at least two women I knew who were almost paranoid about it — and they were shocked when I told them most men LOVE the natural scent of a woman (cue Al Pacino here).
BTW — every time I see someone write “feels” in place of “feelings”, it busts me up. I love it, and I’ll probably start saying it too!
You manage to convey such much – the arousal, restraints and her ambiguity about wanting pain. Great snippet.
That’s so nice of you to say, Jaye. Thanks for commenting!
Delicious!
I concur. Thanks for reading!
I love that element of surprise when he puts first cuff on her wrist.
That inner voice of hers… ‘what if I want you too.’ … I wonder if he’ll catch on that she wants him too?
Great build up, Trent!
Forecast calls for a 90% chance that he doescatch on to it.
Kirsten might want to be careful what she wishes for…
Oh my soul, Trent, have I already asked you to marry me?
“Her heart jack-hammered in her chest, even as her pussy wept her excitement.” So much better than the typical and oft overused descriptors for wet pussies.
And I said yes!! To which your DH expressed decidedly negative feelings about…
Thanks for reading, Patty:)
Great writing, can’t wait for more.
Thank you, Leigh!
Metal cuffs? Hope she doesn’t resist them. They can hurt delicate wrist bones, even in the throes of pleasure. Not at all safe for newbies, and she clearly hasn’t worn cuffs before, which means he’s never put them on her before, either. Great snippet, though, Trent.
Ah, but she’s in good — if not particularly gentle — hands…
So much going on in this snippet, doubt, lust, love, anticipation…great snippet.
Glad you liked it, Sadie!
Such sweet reassurance! Thanks for the lovely snippet, Trent.
Juicy snippet – nice squirmy helplessness while restrained adds to the mix. I liked it 🙂
Very hot, Trent!
Very hot, Trent. I do like how he’s shows his concern.
Hot snippet Trent. I loved it 🙂
OMG, Trent. I’m not going to admit how many of my buttons you’ve pressed with that…let’s just say a hell of a lot, and it’s only a short little piece. It’s sizzling right off the page.