Hello Fellow Spankos,
This week I’m continuing with another snippet from the upcoming full-length D/s novel “The Change”.
In this week’s clip we continue with what happens when Kirsten comes home from work, to find her husband Kiehl waiting for her. It’s their regular night for what they call “The Game”, their mutual exploration of discipline, desire, fantasy, and kink…
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She bent over, acutely feeling her naked vulnerability with her fully clothed husband standing close behind her.
The height of her heels meant her back inclined down toward the couch, her head lower than her hips, the soft curves of her breasts brushing together below her chest.
The fabric of his slacks pressed against her, the long bar of his erection hard against her soft ass. His hands clutched the pendent breasts, squeezing them in a firm grip. “I love these. I can’t wait to see them.”
“What? You can see them now, silly.” She wiggled her ass against his cock, hoping her cunt wasn’t leaving a wet spot against the expensive fabric.
“I mean I can’t wait to see them when you’re heavy with my child.”
“Our child.”
“Tell yourself that when you look in the mirror at your growing belly,” he said, clenching his hands tighter around her breasts. “You’ll know who caused that swelling. Me.”
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I hope you liked this week’s installment! Before you go, please take some time to visit the other stops in this week’s hop. There are a lot of great writers there, and some uber-hot excerpts!
More to come next week:)
Trent
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Christ you can even turn the swelling of the breasts during a pregnancy into a D/s thing. And of course you’ve highlighted one of my favorite positions…
Awesome snippetage (it’s pronounced, “snip-pet-tahjzhzhj,” which is French, of course).
Also, CMNF FTW. And weapons-grade hotness in this story. A spark flew off the screen. Landed in my hair, I panicked. Long story short, hydrant not close enough to house. Happy now?
‘acutely feeling her naked vulnerability with her fully clothed husband standing close behind her’ love, love, love the feelings this evokes.
Hi Trent – Nice snippet. Of all things, I was impressed with the height of her heels! You couldn’t have given us one more line? Some day, I’ll get the courage to put up a “clip” from our book in progress!
OOh liked that. Now there’s something you don’t read everyday… pregnancy and erotica… yummy!
That’s the theme of the book, actually. I wanted to write something that showed that pregnancy could in itself lend another sort of eroticism to a D/s relationship. I think it’s a beautiful thing … but it remains to be seen if I can pull this thing off:)
Thanks for commenting!
There is a vulnerability when the man is fully dressed and the woman isn’t, but oh, it’s such a nice sexy feeling. Good job, Trent.
Very well played, Trent. The fact that he expresses how he feels about her pregnancy and that when she is ‘full’ with child it will remind her of ‘who’ caused it. Very Dom! Love it!
Someone get Sheri some of that fire retardant stuff for her hair, she’s gonna look funny with those bald spots!
I love a man who’s possessive about his pregnant wife. So often the woman feels alone during gestation, since she’s the only one who is physically affected. Great snippet, Trent. I look forward to reading more.
Great snippet. Loved the ‘long bar of his erection’ … great dynamics between these two.
Great snippet Trent. Love the way he loves her body. It was hot and there’s so much love there 🙂
Great imagery. Thanks for a lovely snippet.
Hmm I love this Trent. 😉 Great snippet.
love this, Trent. His message of ownership is so beautifully dominant